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Argumentative Writing Behavior of Graduate EFL Learners

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This study analyzed the argumentative writing behavior of Iranian graduate learners of English as Foreign Language in their English essays. Further, the correlations between the use of argument elements and overall writing quality as well as soundness of produced arguments were investigated. To this end, 150 essays were analyzed. The sample essays were found to be predominantly deductive in terms of rhetorical pattern. Moreover, they mainly utilized ‘data’ and ‘claim’ most frequently with secondary elements of argument (i.e., counterargument claim, counterargument data, rebuttal claim, and rebuttal data) as the least produced elements. Overall writing quality co-varied significantly positively with the uses of claims, data, counterargument claims, counterargument data, rebuttal claims, and rebuttal data. Essays rated high in terms of overall writing quality were further rated for soundness and relevance of the arguments. The results demonstrate that even for advanced language learners good surface structure cannot necessarily guarantee well thought-out logical structure. The pedagogical implications for writing instruction and research are discussed.

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We appreciate the editors and anonymous reviewers of the Argumentation Journal for their meticulous feedback on the earlier drafts of this paper. Nonetheless, all the other potential follies are the authors’ responsibility.

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Table 8 Definitions and examples of argumentation elements used in student essays

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Table 9 Analytic scoring rubric for argumentative writing

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Abdollahzadeh, E., Amini Farsani, M. & Beikmohammadi, M. Argumentative Writing Behavior of Graduate EFL Learners. Argumentation 31, 641–661 (2017). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10503-016-9415-5

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