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The purposes of this study are threefold: It investigates effects of a formative assessment script (FAS) that was designed to support vocational students in generating feedback to (1) a peer’s and (2) their own performance. Effects of the FAS are investigated with respect to quantitative and qualitative characteristics of the peer and internal feedback generated by the students. Furthermore, this study examines (3) if generating peer feedback is beneficial for assessor’s generation of subsequent internal feedback. In a two-factorial quasi-experimental study, 75 vocational students firstly produced individual drafts for a typical technical planning task. Next, students either generated peer feedback (with vs. without FAS support) on a fictitious erroneous peer draft and subsequently on their own drafts or generated internal feedback only (with vs. without FAS support). Results yield beneficial effects of the FAS on generating peer feedback. Students, who were supported by the FAS-generated more comments on the peer draft, were more sensitive in detecting errors and missing information in the peer draft and generated more suggestions for improvement. With respect to assessors’ internal feedback generation, this study revealed mixed results. On the one hand, FAS-supported students generated more comments and ignored fewer erroneous elements in their own drafts. On the other hand, they neither detected more missing information nor generated more suggestions on how to improve their own drafts than students without FAS support. Unexpectedly, generating peer feedback prior to generating internal feedback had no effects on the quality of assessors’ subsequent internal feedback.
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Olaf Peters. Department of Psychology, Institute of Educational and Developmental Psychology, Chair of Psychology of Learning and Instruction, Technische Universität Dresden. E-mail: olaf.peters@tu-dresden.de
Current themes of research:
□ Effects of generating peer feedback
□ Designing and evaluating tutorial feedback strategies
□ Smart teaching and learning with modern information technologies
□ Vocational education
Most relevant publications:
Peters, O., Narciss, S., & Körndle, H. (2014). Development and Evaluation of a Formative Assessment and Feedback (FAF) Script to Support Generating Feedback to a Peer versus to One’s Own Performance. In J. L. Polman, E. A. Kyza, D. K. O'Neill, I. Tabak, W. R. Penuel, A. S. Jurow, K. O'Connor, T. Lee, and L. D'Amico (Eds.), Learning and becoming in practice: The International Conference of the Learning Sciences (ICLS) 2014, Volume 3 (pp. 1421–1422). Boulder, CO: International Society of the Learning Sciences.
Prof. Dr. Hermann Körndle. Department of Psychology, Institute of Educational and Developmental Psychology, Chair of Psychology of Learning and Instruction, Technische Universität Dresden. E-mail: hermann.koerndle@tu-dresden.de
Current themes of research:
□ Technology-enhanced learning and instruction
□ Design and investigation of interactive learning tasks
□ Competency-based teacher education and training
□ Vocational education and training in and with sociotechnical systems
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Prof. Dr. Susanne Narciss. Department of Psychology, Institute of Educational and Developmental Psychology, Chair of Psychology of Learning and Instruction, Technische Universität Dresden. E-mail: susanne.narciss@tu-dresden.de
Current themes of research:
□ Design and evaluation of interactive tutoring feedback strategies
□ Design and evaluation of interactive learning tasks
□ Smart teaching and learning with modern information technologies
□ Interplay of motivational and metacognitive factors in self-regulated learning
Most relevant publications:
Narciss, S. (2013). Designing and Evaluating Tutoring Feedback Strategies for Digital Learning Environments on the basis of the Interactive Tutoring Feedback Model. Digital Education Review, 23, 7–26.
Strijbos, J.---W., Narciss, S., & Dünnebier, K. (2010). Peer feedback content and sender's competence level in academic writing revision tasks: Are they critical for feedback perceptions and efficiency? Learning and Instruction, 20, 291–303 doi:10.1016/j.learninstruc.2009.08.008
Narciss, S. (2008). Feedback strategies for interactive learning tasks. In J.M. Spector, M.D. Merrill, J.J.G. Van Merrienboer, & M.P. Driscoll (Eds.), Handbook of Research on Educa¬tional Communications and Technology (3rd ed., pp. 125–144). Mahaw, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. [ausgezeichnet mit dem AECT-Distinguished Development Award 2007]
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Peters, O., Körndle, H. & Narciss, S. Effects of a formative assessment script on how vocational students generate formative feedback to a peer’s or their own performance. Eur J Psychol Educ 33, 117–143 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10212-017-0344-y
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